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Anger bubbles up to the surface
Barely contained by a smile
One wrong word and I might snap
Tread lightly around the fire

I’m fine, I’m fine, I’m fine
I’ve contained it all this long
To tell anyone would be weakness
And I need to stay strong

I bottle it up, and restrain myself
Never let my cover be blown
I don’t want to hurt anyone
Which means my anger can never show

I’m fine, I’m fine, I’m fine
I just need to hold on
I’ve tried to hold back the flame
But my strength is almost gone

The rage beats at my resolve
Tears it down with no mercy
I stare at the mirror
My hatred glares back at me

I’m not fine, not fine
I now stand here, broken
I thought I could stand against it
But the anger has left me, beaten
I was trying to write about self restraint...but it didn't work out too well haha
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ThorOdinson61 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  New member Student General Artist
No that was basically how i felt a year ago and you expressed it perfectly, you seriously gave me chills
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student General Artist
yay ^^ I'm glad you like it
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NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It turned out wonderful. This is actually how it is for me. I hold it in and then yeah...
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
thanks ^^ I'm glad you can relate to it
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NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^^; With me being so... Different... It's easy for me to relate.
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
well different is good ^^
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NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Usually. My different is more like a crazy different.
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
well I think that whatever it is, it's what makes you awesome
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NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Multiple personalities and such.
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student General Artist
ohhh okatay
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