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that boy you called gay for picking flowers
laid them on his parents graves
the girl you called a whore for sleeping around
was abused since a very young age

that emo kid everyone makes fun of
plans to die tonight
when the boy you push around goes home
everyone's in a fight

the kid you punched the other day
gets hit enough at home
that girl you always tell she's fat
throws up her food when she's alone

the kid everybody tells they're dumb
has been told that all their life
maybe you think it's funny
but to them, it hurts more than their knife
Bullying is wrong. Even on a small level like just saying a couple nasty things hurts. What if everything in this poem is happening to the people you make fun of? Think before you say this stuff because it sinks deep and never really goes away after you tell it to someone. I know from experience.
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:iconnightmarewolf123:
NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate to this. The words bullies throw at me does hurt more than my knife.
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student General Artist
They definitely do...and I numb up against my knife after a while, the words always hurt.
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NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have 55 cuts, and not a single one hurt more than the words.
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I don't count mine, but I do know that the words always cut deeper
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:iconnightmarewolf123:
NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My brother was like "Oh my gosh! That's A LOT!" When I told him about the 21 on my right leg. 55 is too much more than 21. -.- I wish I could stop as easily as I started.
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student General Artist
As do I, I have tried the butterfly project, and it helped for a while...but it doesn't always work
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:iconnightmarewolf123:
NightmareWolf123 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I may have created The Butterfly Project, but I don't use it.
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student General Artist
you created it?
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Rainbow-Sunlight Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that is so....beautiful~
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
thanks :)
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Rainbow-Sunlight Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome :D
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:iconricardo-orozco:
Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oo that last word hurt <3 :) great poem :)
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Student General Artist
thanks :) the last line is one of the most important
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
everyone should have to read this. it's great!
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student General Artist
thanks :) I have revised it so many times, so I'm glad its good
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :D
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WeissLupus Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've seen something very similar to this already online but it's not a poem =
P That where you got your inspiration? Overall great poem it flows very smoothly i only suggest to maybe add a bi more closure for the last stanza to wrap it all up! :)
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student General Artist
I did not see the thing you are referring to, i actually just came up with it from my past experiences and those that ive seen. Ill try to take your advice on that last stanza though :)
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WeissLupus Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just something I saw on fb =p I like yours better though :)
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks :D
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ECatsie Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You made my day sir. :D (Big Grin)  
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student General Artist
haha well you are welcome...but i happen to be a girl
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:iconecatsie:
ECatsie Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well, You still made my day xD
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student General Artist
no problemo Meow :3
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Kosamy Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
 so many feels Really Sad 
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
i know :(
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k9lover64 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student General Artist
wow, that really does sink deep. I've been in the shoes of several of these people and it's nice for other people to see it too.
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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
yea i figured this needed to be said
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k9lover64 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
well thank you again. c:
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
It was my pleasure :)
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JustCallMeZoola Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I've been trying and trying to write a poem like this, but I can't seem to get the right words... This is just beautiful ^^ if you don't mind me saying... xD

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ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student General Artist
i dont mind it at all, i was hoping people would like it :)
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JustCallMeZoola Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it :D I'm thinking of writing mine about my OC's crappy life and stuff :)
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks :D and i cant wait to see it!
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:iconjustcallmezoola:
JustCallMeZoola Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D and I hope it actually makes it to dA xD
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:iconennailaughter:
ennailaughter Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Me too :D
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JustCallMeZoola Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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